You are my music, sweeter than mursik, when am sick of you, you still stick to me like super glue. Super dude is what I can call you, stall you is what I can never do, forever have you, is what I would like to do, wound you, is what I never do. You are the best lover.
In pursuit of a comparison, you are my song suit for a reason, like a 5-star hotel suite I love your quality, never based on quantity but sanctity, the time we spend comprises of memories I never erase, melodies I ever anticipate to not serenade. I want to teach the world on how to imitate good love, and how it is made.
When you kiss my neck, I miss the point and instead get lost in your seduction, what the heck, we end up in bed for satisfaction! When I kiss your ear, you hear nothing but the bliss of my captivity. I gain as you always make me feel young, sprung like it’s our first time, a dime is what you are, hung up sometimes, I feel like I am who you are.
In show for my love, I throw my fears to you, my tears on you, consequently only you make things right, you are my light, my judge, you never smudge anything on me. As every night my thoughts merge, you frequently cross my mind, currently I have submerged my entire being to you, hope I don’t budge when I wake you up to stare, understand it’s a mere urge.
You are my favourite DJ, always in my favour even when am in PJs. You say you like it that way, I say I like it your way. In the morning you play the baby making record, ‘baby make love to me, ’I beg in one accord. As am mourning you play me some soul, just like the band playing, you are my Earth, Wind and Fire, blazing. You sweep me off my feet, remain so sweet and just by the touch of your hand, you burn me up!!
ahem wow i so love the neck part hon..hmmm he is one lucky brother=)
Me lovest!! As always this is just awesome!
enriching, love the way you sync your phrases you a natural girl
You so got it. Ok, u are one of my best poetic reads.
This is so very sweet. If someone told me this i would probably marry them right then and there.
Am with wamathai that’s definately not someone you would let get away. Great read this one though the guy would be lost for words…I wouldn’t know how to respond to such beautiful words if they were sent my way
So sweet and it flows so well.
my darling you are amaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiingggggggggg!!!!!!!!!! love your work tena na tena na tena..beautiful 🙂
Such an amazing expression, such a lovely piece. Inspired.
I guess your comments inspire me even more! THANK YOU. it’s not any particular guy i write about but my heart hopes that one day i will actually write this for a dude..i def know how i wanna feel for someone,i.e when i find that someone…
Not bad. Not at all.
Awesome….!!!!!keep up the good work…xx
Love the sweeter than mursik bit he hehe .. he
Have just loved it. keep up the good work. You have touched me
wow…! i like the way you kiss my neck part, i know the feeling..hmmm! Haven’t felt that in a while*sigh*..anyway back to reality, i really do feel you in this one..
WOW! WOW! AND WOW!
Writing is an art which you wholly possess!this is amazing!
the almost forgotten tingling sensation of a first love. You’ve brought back memories ma. Me likey. Keep em coming ma…keep em coming.